My reflection on this argument paper is deal with ruling class and knowing how to rule with ethics. So far I am about to write down what I am going to write I have already have my information about this subject it is quite long but I will try to narrow it down. I just think that we need more opportunities for the poor and more money for all. I am not sure why I choose this subject I just think that if government is regulating a country should they try to better their people first and then the world. It sound bias if I decide to write this but I would try to the best of my abilities to make it arguable and not bias.
A good argument paper has to have to audience, have to be arguable and have a both side story between the positives from the negatives. By what I have learn today assume benevolence is by trying to get into your audience head. I think I could persuade the lower class of society and maybe the middle and high class. Base on my revision I cannot be so bias or passive.
The first thing I have trouble with is my audience. I really don’t focus or think about the audience. First of all to make it more effective I have to write more because I only wrote the thesis. I think my writing could be good but it seems I write in a passive way which I do not realize entirely only after it is graded. I just have to think about my audience more and making good sentence.
Monday, April 13, 2009
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i really enjoyed your paper
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